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Talking about you,
brings me good memories.
writing about you,
reminds me of many stories.
Sometimes it makes me cry,
Sometimes it makes me smile.
I remember I have to try.
This memory is my eternal file.
My inspiration.
My best friend.
My motivation.
My love has no end.
I made you inspire me.
You taught me love.
I will always remember you.
And I always try to improve.
I thank God,
because He is good.
He gave me a super dad.
I appreciate the moments we had.
My first poem in English.
And talking about you brought me inspiration ...
I didn't think I could do that.
But you taught me motivation.
Love is not just a word,
it's really a feeling.
Go beyond the world.
And I'm learning.
I don't know how to write much in English,
but I came here to try.
Writing about you,
made me look at the sky.
The sky is so beautiful.
It is also surprising.
It is wonderful.
Looking at it teaches me that I need to keep walking.
Walking towards dreams,
In God always trusting.
Always looking forward.
And keep smiling.
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Autor:
Jessica Maria. (Pseudónimo (
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- Comentário do autor sobre o poema: Meu primeiro poema em inglês...Estou aprendendo o idioma e me desafie em escrever um poema em inglês...Confesso que não foi fácil...Quis tentar desistir... Escrevi umas duas vezes...Mas não chegava a inspiração...Rasguei as folhas... Mas depois como uma poeta...tentei novamente, até a inspiração vir...e na verdade ela estava aqui...na minha mente...Lembrar do meu Pai me fez escrever esse poema... Precisei de uma ajuda de uma teacher sensacional para fazer as correções...Mas aí está ele... espero que gostem. Pai...Escrevi para você?...Pois O Senhor continua bem vivo na minha mente e coração.
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Comentários2
Congratulations, Jessica Maria! It is always good to read about other people's feelings. I really appreciated your poem in which your dad was your inspiration. Another thing I liked about it, was that you believe in God and that is nice. God bless you!
Dear, Jéssica, writes poem in english. I believe that is very hard. It demands strong effort. Because you need special words for building the structure. But you did a great one.
Congratulations and keep walking!
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